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Hate by ~Sylvanashala:iconSylvanashala:

Categories Literature > Poetry > General Poetry > Open


                           
                                    Hate

Colored rage and dark anger
Writhing black night, red blood flows
Cold, burning evil; Cowardly purple fear.
         No light shines down this bottomless Pit!   
A broken heart festers within a disease-ridden soul,
on a bleak, barren and grey Earth.
War pollutes the mind and soul until in fear and anger
it strikes out, hurting many.
A cry for help goes unheard in the dark of night.
         No light shines down this bottomless Pit!
Hope has fallen beneath the black sword of hate.
No light, No hope, No will.
©2005-2010 ~Sylvanashala
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Author's Comments

I feel somewhat more comfortable putting my poetry up here than anywhere else. I am going to start with the oldest ones that i have. These are mostly from highschool, so are fairly aged. :) I hope that you all will enjoy them.

This particular one was an english project. . . let's just say that i got a good grade, eh?

©Copyright Tabitha. For use, kindly contact the author for permission. May not be used fully or partially in any form without permission.

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~citalopraming Jun 14, 2005, 7:27:47 AM
Nice style I can relate to the poem...I feel inspired by your style...Hope you don't mind if i try to emulate the same sort of writing.The rythme seems to be just right

--
Art is not dead,
It just smells funny.
:pills:
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~Sylvanashala Jun 14, 2005, 7:57:30 AM
*blushes* thanks. :)

--
". . . into the depths i looked
only to be swallowed by the darkness. . ."



Art -- ~ThroughSapphyreEyes
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~ClyMaxx Jun 14, 2005, 7:57:48 AM
I like the unique style, you write a lot of topics that I do. Lol. Good job. A typo, " fester within"* =) Keep it up.

--
Never believe in someone else's beliefs because no two beliefs between different people is ever the truly the same.
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~Sylvanashala Jul 1, 2005, 6:06:23 AM
Thank-you. :) and thanks for letting me know about the error...it has now be corrected. :)

--
". . . into the depths i looked
only to be swallowed by the darkness. . ."



Art -- ~ThroughSapphyreEyes
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